Bliss



by Steffi Edwin--


A soul sat near the shore.

With grief in heart – vision left

the clod and rose up to core.

The eyelid shuts and cracked soft.



And the waggling basal tears flushed to care.

Usual sky with clouds appeared liquid – mellow

heart remind, your soul is the strongest ocean lure

than the vision you see now.



EXPLANATION

(Just for the explanation I took the gender as female for the soul mentioned in the poem)


A girl sat near a sea shore with pain all over her. And the eyes left the land and rose above to the sky. The movement she closes and opens her eyelid, tears flushed to console her and covered the whole eyes without dropping out.

When she saw the sky with tears on eyes, she had the feeling of her whole body and the sky was under water. So she felt excited and comfortable, as if the water is having her in its hands without drowning in.

The tears were waggling in eyes as the water in rivers waggle, so it was a bit funny to look at clouds as if they were dancing on its way. There comes the sweet little smile which popped her cheeks up.

After her thanks to God for wonderful nature, she inhaled and locked as much of air her lungs could bare. And her inner voice gently whispered saying, your heart and soul is the big and strongest ocean than the sea and sky which is in front of you. And she exhaled her whole breath out with brief relaxation.

She then stood and started to walk, to face the struggles which life throws on her.